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asahina mafuyu ♪ 朝比奈まふゆ ([personal profile] applehearted) wrote in [community profile] starsand2023-03-31 10:24 am

【NETWORK】UN: mother's trophy

[ Forward dated to around 1 AM on April 1st-- ]

I'll be sending over a short sample. This is still a rough draft, so I might change the wording of things later down the line as well, so let me know what you think.

Enveloping the light and darkness of the stars above,
"What did they wish for," you ask of me
Still don't know all the answers even as they continuously cry out

The pain they've captured these passing days
It's like wandering through an endless nightmare
Only one thing is engraved in their soul:
I want more and more and more
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UN: pathetic wet cat

[personal profile] composalvation 2023-03-31 05:35 pm (UTC)(link)
this is pretty good so far
it fits the flow in the lead-up to the chorus well
i'm not sure if i'm going to change too much of that part, so keeping a similar vibe would be best


[There's a pause as Kanade scrolls back up to skim the lyrics again.... but then-]

............. ah
mafuyu
did you... change your display name?
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[personal profile] composalvation 2023-03-31 09:41 pm (UTC)(link)
[mmmmmm she doesn't like this. She barely blinks at her own display name, but...]

ah, i didn't even notice
but yeah, i didn't touch my name at all

... i'd say it's just a glitch, but... those names...
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[personal profile] composalvation 2023-04-01 04:07 am (UTC)(link)
mmm, they're really not

[A pause, then-]

... are you feeling okay?
popsometags: (i'm too young and poor for this.)

un: cat food eater

[personal profile] popsometags 2023-03-31 05:49 pm (UTC)(link)
[ He has several... hundred questions. Everything considered, he decides to respond, even this early in the morning. ]

It sounds really bleak.

...is this Mafuyu? When did you change your username?
popsometags: (the debt collectors are here!)

[personal profile] popsometags 2023-03-31 08:23 pm (UTC)(link)
That's peculiar. I'm going to try to file a complaint to get it changed back.

Actually, I don't know how I would do that.


[ ......... ]

When do you sleep?
popsometags: (i won't let them get to her.)

[personal profile] popsometags 2023-03-31 08:33 pm (UTC)(link)
You just strike me as someone who would sleep earlier than this.
popsometags: (you... you dropped it.)

[personal profile] popsometags 2023-04-01 03:21 am (UTC)(link)
[ .........

the screen in front of him flashes for a moment, and Mafuyu gets a picture that's just. This face. ]
popsometags: (final notice...?)

[personal profile] popsometags 2023-04-01 03:50 am (UTC)(link)
We should really fix your sleep schedule.
popsometags: (moshi moshi. demon desu.)

[personal profile] popsometags 2023-04-02 04:20 am (UTC)(link)
I'll have to lecture her too then. It's a good way to burn yourself out.
popsometags: (ah. another 10 yen coin.)

[personal profile] popsometags 2023-04-10 09:08 pm (UTC)(link)
I hadn't been used to sleeping comfortably until I came here. I would go to school, work, make paper roses, and then fall asleep on one of my tatami.
popsometags: (final notice...?)

[personal profile] popsometags 2023-04-10 09:55 pm (UTC)(link)
It means my quality of sleep was atrocious. It's a wonder I was able to make it through the day every day.